Organization: Clarity without clutter
Organizing information is a challenge for
writers. Poor organization can knock the power out of your message and
be a source of frustration for you and your readers. The plain language
process can strengthen your organizing skills and your bond with readers.
Here are some ideas.
Get clear on the task
First, organize yourself and your production team. Agree
on your audience profile, commit to the central message and clarify your
purpose. Form the foundation of your document by answering the who,
what, and why.
Remember, the reader is a key member of the organizing
team. Reader input ensures readability and usability.
Adopt a plain perspective
Every subject can be looked at from different perspectives.
Which perspective should you take to present the information most effectively
for your particular readers? Some of the perspectives on a social issue
might come from the children, the families, the schools, the neighborhoods,
the police, the court system, the community, the political system. Perspective
may also come through a concept such as crime prevention or the
benefits of the extended family. Any number of angles on the subject
can be tackled, but you need to choose one unifying perspective from which
you explore the various sides of the prism.
Organize the information logically
We have found this framework useful for organizing large
amounts of information:
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Create categories for your information.
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Divide the information among the categories.
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Put categories in an appropriate sequence.
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Figure out a rational secondary division of topics
within the categories.
There are three elements to consider when creating information
categories: >the nature of the subject itself, >the reader's objectives
and needs, and >your guiding purpose or strategy. You can categorize
information according to the types of information, the variety of concepts,
or their importance or priority.
Some topics organize easily into a chronological, alphabetical
or hierarchical order. Others are more difficult. Sometimes a document
flows well if you use a basic question and answer format like Who,
what, when, where, and how?
Other patterns include
When in doubt, let the readers' needs be your guide.
Answer readers' questions as they arise
Do a point form list of the questions you need to answer
for your readers. This list might become an outline of headings or it
might just serve to keep you on track in preparing your first draft. When
you look at the list, consider again whether you have chosen the most
appropriate sequence for the topics. What will your reader want to know
first, next, and last (or least)? Consider the need for clear headings
to serve as signposts, with definite breaks between major topics like
policy, procedure, and instruction.
Let's take a software manual as an example. Users complain
about manuals being organized by some mysterious logic. The key is to
organize the information according to the tasks the user will perform
because that's how we approach the manual -- looking for clues to how
to solve a problem and complete a task. It doesn't help the user when
the manual topics are beginner, advanced, special projects. When
we've got a problem, the task is obviously too advanced for us, but it
could seem basic to the manual's writer. And when we do something new,
how do we know whether it is considered a special project or just one
we haven't yet encountered? Always use categories the readers will recognize.
In Information Anxiety, Saul Wurman said that
communicating is remembering what it is like not to understand. Readers
need new information but they also need to be able to access it with their
existing knowledge. Readers want to be able to find it easily and quickly.
Plain language helps.
Know your readers' needs
Last, but not least, plain language process requires
adequate research into the way your particular readers will receive and
use the information. Documents need to be tested. This includes methods
of involving the reader in assessing the information before final draft
to ensure that it's easy to understand, use, and get at in a hurry.
So far in this series we've covered laying the foundation
through research about readers' needs and advance planning, then organizing
information to make it easy for your readers. Next issue we'll talk about
writing for real people with a low tolerance for jargon and obfuscation.
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